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[原创(V家)] 【SweetAnn】一只原创处女作参上My Angel [复制链接]

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lawnbeforedawn 发表于 2010/11/24 19:15:30 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
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这是10月初次用vocaloid做的……是一首相当诡异+相当冗长的叙事歌……
当初写的时候是一气呵成……但是做出来花了整整两天秋假……
vocaloid 比较冷门的sweet ann加上(也是第一次)用acoustica mixcraft 4 做的伴奏
发现ann酱唱歌时英式口音浓重……而且aI这个音是死角啊死角= =最后一气之下都用V取而代之= =
歌词有时候对不上伴奏……还有几次都被伴奏盖住了……第一次混音失败= =
歌词如下=||||=英文无能ing
My Angel (my copyright preserved=w=)
My angel, why on earth is this whole world so insane
Why on earth do we have to battle for our lives
My angel, why am I so helpless in front of my fate
Why does it have to be like this, can you tell me
My angel, are we going to die in this sea of agony
I see clouds and floods of those fearful beasts no longer humanly
You say nothing and vanish to protect my every side
My own weapon, shaking in my hands, let no protest
My angel, please stop the fight, please stop the slaying
I would rather see my own blood than those of your glory
Make it stop, I cannot afford to let you risk your precious life
I care of you, I love you, please leave me alone
My angel, you ignore my desperate and screaming cries
Your bright eyes, fierce and blood-colored, throw me a piercing glance
You say, you are not a coward but I am obliged for you
Your sword, still deadly sharp, swiped through the red
My angel, why isn't it over by you once promised
Your ruby eyes were so dearly clear that I could not place my doubts
My heart is racing in my chest, delivering hints of time
You take a breath, saying nothing, but I see
My angel, your tears are the one last thing I expect you to have
Your flawless angelic features show no weaknesses
Yet you whisper, a whisper that is barely audible
Be ready, from heart to soul, from shape to mind
My angel, your every move is transparent in extraordinary speed
Yet your eyes remain translucent, coordinating with the bloody air
Red stains range from your blade to your face to your invisible wings
You grimace, I freeze, I freeze within your charm
My angel, stop it, stop it, I rush to save my soul from another wave of guilt
You say nothing, dangerous and cruel eyes swipe from me to me
If it's only me, then leave me to find your own safety
I will write my declaration with my blood or theirs
My angel, you smile a smile I'm not familiar with
You say, you are the only reason I am here exist
If you go, I will perish along in mortality as well
I bite my lips and exhale deeply
My angel, you tell me what am I supposed to do
Your voice is plain, your words are pale, but so determined
You tell me you will find a way to break through our target
As soon as you find it, it's the end
My angel, you take your shielding charm and toss it in the air
It is how I will have to sacrifice, you say
I burst into cries, this is suicide, please do not give up like that
But your eyes were solid and crystalline translucent again
My angel, I strike, my chances up to three
I try so hard to forget you as I go for her destruction
You cheered me in my back and I got all my strength alright
But suddenly, all falls silent
My angel, you pace your graceful steps right up to me
Smiling into my eyes so gently as you hold my face
It will be over in no time, you say, it is almost time for dawn
Everything will be over in no time
My angel, you tiny body fall into my open arms
And then emptiness take hold of my heart beating irregularly
Silver mercury shaded moonlight color my clothes and my soul
I unsheathe my rage, taking your place like a real guardian
My angel, I pray for peace yet I cannot see its end
I hold my faith for life yet I cannot foresee my fate
Break through, be still is what you always say
I now finally, finally see the meaning
My angel, it is now my turn to guard, my turn to fight
You can see the dedication carved in my eyes
I have learned how to give, how to sacrifice
And yes, after the night sun will rise

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Judith Esometh Ann. =w=

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子夜 发表于 2010/11/24 19:17:34 |只看该作者
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哦……sweet ann可美了~就是盒子可怕了点~

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创作者 精华文章创作者 巡音の爱 已经合不上嘴了...

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Z零Z 发表于 2010/11/25 08:48:28 |只看该作者
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曲子写的很有欧洲叙事歌曲得感觉的说~~不过音响听起来貌似是外录的 ——  

With a noose around my neck.
World be damned and move forward.
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燕静流 发表于 2010/11/25 13:37:47 |只看该作者
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表示英语基本不能识别,旋律很好听啊~~
不过这个音质有点微妙啊...


所谓萝莉控...都是因为小时候没有得到萝莉的爱吧...
扭曲吧~扭曲吧~扭曲吧~~~~まっがーれ~まっがーれ~まっがーれ~~~~

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OVO香肠好棒好棒的!

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forjaes 发表于 2010/11/26 20:13:16 |只看该作者
本帖最后由 2323223aaa 于 2015/12/12 19:32 编辑

喔唷!sweetann相当美,先回帖然后慢慢听
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其实这曲子主要讲的是啥已经不重要了|||
这曲子好好弄弄,是首听完以后有回味的曲子

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jadedargon 发表于 2010/11/26 23:34:32 |只看该作者
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... 混乱~~~~不过很好听~~~

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lawnbeforedawn 发表于 2010/11/27 13:13:40 |只看该作者
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    那是因为混音崩了(表示这是一试验品……当时不知道世界上还有控制音量一说= =

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lawnbeforedawn 发表于 2010/11/27 13:16:16 |只看该作者
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    英语什么的……曾经有同学问我,sweet ann 唱的是普通话还是粤语= =
至于旋律,有点借题发挥的意思=||||=

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lawnbeforedawn 发表于 2010/11/27 13:17:16 |只看该作者
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    混响?表示无能……(看来又要返工了= =

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lawnbeforedawn 发表于 2010/11/27 13:19:44 |只看该作者
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    我表示渴望54歌词……不过这曲子确实是太长了(所以长的有回味= =

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sala282 发表于 2010/11/27 15:51:09 |只看该作者
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强啊1!!

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david10208 发表于 2010/11/28 14:58:40 |只看该作者
↑我倒是觉得这比喻挺好的……
恩……就是滑音有点不自然(音痴音?)

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七星鱼丸 发表于 2010/12/8 11:10:42 |只看该作者
曲子写得非常好,旋律很优美,忽然想知道楼主的故事

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