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[原创(V家)] [GUMI] Love Hunt Game [中国語オリジナル] [复制链接]

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HeXueLi 发表于 2012/5/1 08:28:12 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
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推荐:nico伪翻墙脚本(中国大陆用户浏览nico需要翻墙)
我参加Vocaloid3的纪念比赛。请支持我!
I'm entering the Vocaloid3 Commemoration Contest. Please support me by viewing the video on nico!
中文不是我的母语。歌词可能会很奇怪。
Chinese is not my native language, so the lyrics may not be very understandable.
如果上不了Nico能在这里听
If you can't go on Nico, you can listen to it here


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阿狸 发表于 2012/5/1 10:17:35 |只看该作者
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Ummmmmm,it sounds gooooooooood~!【Athough I don't understand what she sings,sorrry XD】
Could you put the lyrics on please?【Sorry for my poor English XD】
Are you Canadian wwwww?

新曲求顶http://bbs.ivocaloid.com/redirect.php?tid=102880&goto=lastpost#lastpost
http://w.livedoor.jp/kiroroloid/

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lww338 发表于 2012/5/1 11:35:15 |只看该作者
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I think it‘s really a good song
but sorry
I can’t understang the lyrics。。。【sorry orz】

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misu 发表于 2012/5/1 13:05:09 |只看该作者
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U‘d better use JPN to introduce in nico...Even it's a CHN song

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Scarecrow 发表于 2012/5/1 13:10:40 |只看该作者
本帖最后由 2323223aaa 于 2015/12/12 15:54 编辑

    Your song can be considered as impressive,but I have to say that in terms of arrangement and melody you still need to improve then.
    I'm just curious that if you are really not from China,why your first reporting topic
was written in Chinese?I was the person who welcomed you so I haven't totally forgotten
that.Then about the lyric,really...how to say that then......strange?I can hardly understand.Why not just write english text or japanese text anyway?you know both japanese bank and english bank exist.
   I've quited,so everything related to vocaloid and vocaloid producers has nothing to do with me.I write these just because i'm interested in your identity,neither your artwork nor so-called support.I never believe that one guy can achieve supports from China.
In China,advertisements and promotion decide everything.Personally speaking,nobody cares about your talant but how many advertisements exist.Sorry for saying so...just ignore it,ignore me.I do apologize.

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咱只是个学生.....

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ak2806 发表于 2012/5/1 13:45:54 |只看该作者
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I want to say ..... WHY DO YOU SPEAK ENGLISH?
AND .... The lyrics are toooooooooo..... I can't understand them

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咱只是个学生.....

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ak2806 发表于 2012/5/1 13:48:04 |只看该作者
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话说LZ是华裔?

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rubino666 发表于 2012/5/1 15:26:54 |只看该作者
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........Why are you all speak English.
nico mylist get!
I think this is a good song.
But arranger can do better, gumi‘s Chinese can also be better.
Keep it up!Come on!
As a college student who had only pass the CET4 is  useing Google translator shamefully now....

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HeXueLi 发表于 2012/5/2 07:50:16 |只看该作者
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I will post them later :).
I'm surprised that you guessed Canadian first. How did you know oAo?

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HeXueLi 发表于 2012/5/2 09:46:25 |只看该作者
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I understand. This is my first original song I've uploaded for others to hear, so up until now, I haven't gotten much advice or criticism on what to improve. Thank you for your feedback :).
I am Chinese, however I was born in Germany and I live in Canada. I stated that Chinese wasn't my mother tongue because I am the most fluent in English. Also, in my first post, I had a friend help me translate the template of the introduction. I'm pretty sure that the Chinese I used back then was really bad as well..? I'm using English to post now because I think it's easier to understand a google translated version of what I wrote instead of trying to read my Chinese.
As for the lyrics... I wrote them in the way that I speak. My Chinese is extremely influenced by English grammar... I guess you can't even call it Chinese? The people who I mostly speak Chinese to are fluent in both English and Chinese, and can figure out what I'm saying. That's why nobody ever corrects my grammar or vocabulary. I really wish they would, though...
Another reason why the lyrics are not understandable is that you have to have read Shakespeare's Twelfth Night to understand the pun. More specifically, you have to know what a "hart" is. It's my fault for not explaining more clearly. Also, due to my lack of fluency in Chinese, it was very hard to think of lyrics using only what I knew, and some help from some dictionaries. Near the completion of the song, although I know it's not the right attitude to have, I just wanted to finish it and upload it.
The contest only allows for certain Vocaloid3 Vocaloids to be used. I already bought Megpoid Complete before I knew about the contest. There's a few reasons that I didn't use English... but I'll only list one or two here. Speaking English for so many years has made it seem kind of boring for me. As well as that, making GUMI sing in Chinese helps me improve my Chinese vocabulary and reading skills by making me search up and remember words that I don't know. I've learned quite a few new expressions and words just from the making of this song. I've also learned to recognize more characters. As for Japanese... out of the five languages that I've learned, Japanese is fourth on the list of the languages I'm most fluent in.
Anyway, you've picked quite a complicated identity to be interested in.
I don't mind that you're not interested in my work or in supporting me. I'm actually very glad that you posted this. This way I can explain everything properly. Also, I think I didn't communicate very well what I meant by "support".
I don't think I'm asking too much when I say "please support me". I'm not asking to have fans. I'm not asking to become well-known or popular. I'm not asking people to like my song, although knowing that they like some aspects of it would make me happy. What I meant to say was, "if you have the time, please watch my video." My goal is only to get 1000 views before the end of June. If people don't want to watch the video, it's ok. I don't mind at all. If people do watch the video, I'll be really happy and grateful to them :)!
Advertisements and promotions decide everything, not only in China, but in most other countries. There is A LOT of talent out there, but realistically only those who get lucky and make the right choices will end up gaining fame. I do very much understand this. I see it so often, everywhere.
You don't need to apologize for anything at all :). I'm not upset, mad or discouraged. Once again, thanks for posting your opinion and questions!
(I know I already answered these questions in your private message... but I thought I might as well explain for others who are curious as well.)

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Scarecrow 发表于 2012/5/2 11:01:44 |只看该作者
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    firstly,thanks for your answers :) it must have taken you lots of time to finish reading what i posted yesterday and answering all of my boring questions.Thamks for your patience anyway XD
Well,can i just regard you as a foreigner if you dont mind?Actually i often carry on international communications so i've been used to speaking english.All you need is just 1000 view?Not music itself?

ちょっと...休んでもいいかな...

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HeXueLi 发表于 2012/5/2 13:13:46 |只看该作者
回复 11# Scarecrow

No problem~. Sorry for making the explanation so long!

I don't mind at all! And yes. Only 1000 views.

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阿狸 发表于 2012/5/3 20:44:45 |只看该作者
回复 9# HeXueLi
I saw you in haru's chatting group, you said you are Canadian in your QQ introduction.
(I will go to Canada this summer for my study, but my English is reaaaally ... HOW CAN I LIVE THERE?!)

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HeXueLi 发表于 2012/5/4 09:16:06 |只看该作者
回复 13# 阿狸

Oh! I see! I thought you might have been from the chat, but I wasn't sure xD.

Well, depending on what city you're going to and where you're studying, English might not be a problem. One important thing to remember is that if you meet lots of Chinese people, make sure a few of them can speak English well xD. In my University, students that come from China and can't speak English well, become friends with others who might not know English very well either... and then they only speak Chinese to each other. It's kind of hard to learn English that way if you only speak to people who will speak only Chinese to you. Find some friends who are good at English and Chinese, and tell them to speak mostly English to you ovo! Also, don't be afraid to become friends with others who aren't Chinese or Asian :)!

I'm a bit curious now, but where in Canada are you going to be studying?

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wstnf1995 发表于 2012/5/4 11:14:05 |只看该作者
そうね。いつも友達と中国語でおしゃべりしたら、英語が旨くならないね。

日本語を分かる?分からなかったら、どうしてニコニコを知ってる?
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実話ね、言葉を少し替えたら、すばらしになると思うよ (^-^)

。。。ごめんね、英語が下手だ = =
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阿狸 发表于 2012/5/4 19:56:22 |只看该作者
回复 14# HeXueLi
I will go to Edmonton. I go there for my senior high. However the most students in my school is Japanese XD, and also I have some friends there (not too much, just two)

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erin-h 发表于 2012/5/5 19:54:57 |只看该作者
回复 1# HeXueLi


    First,I think it's a very great song~(Even if I cannot underrstand the lyrics' meaning。。。。。。)
But after all,“Music Without Borders”!
At last,could you pleae put the lyrics on the bbs?
(For my bad English,I'm so sorry......>~<   And who was used the GOOGLE TRANSLATE?)

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yesongily 发表于 2012/5/6 00:13:32 |只看该作者
说真的,在中国即使一个vocaloid高手,要做出大家都听得懂的汉语歌,也是非常不容易的。其实对于歌词的话,语法的问题并不重要,但是汉语的发音确实很难用vocaloid做出来,我听过的好多vocaloid汉语歌都完全听不懂XP。。。
另外,这首歌的电子风很有爱,让我想起了功夫小子这款FC游戏XD。。只是略显单调了吧,大概

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神之领域135 发表于 2012/5/19 15:15:23 |只看该作者
本帖最后由 神之领域135 于 2012/5/19 15:16 编辑

蛋疼的英语···
This song does give me a fresh feeling~~
Well,in this page,do fellows practise our English we learn in China?Please show mercy to my pool English.I wanna tell you that the song is better in vocal ,but stiff in Instrumental.~~~

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